Visually i was there
For me great writing is being able to feel as if i am going thru this too.
You have a way with few words to paint so much
Please continue, i think you have so much to expunge and share
so much more to explore

you killed the rabbit
He killed the rabbit in you
rabbit blood on your underwear?
karma/fate/symbolism/destiny
represents our crazy cycle of our lives
the remorse, the guilt, the pleasure, the joy, the pain, the shame.

I know you have touched my heart
so for me to feel a feeling: is a good thing.
i hope you continue your writings
this will help you and others
i know it has helped me
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Scott
"You can always hear the laughter but seldom hear a tear fall."
Keith Johnstone