Rap? well I can see where you got the idea there though I didn't really have it in mind, mostly the structure sort of came from The Beatles I am The Walrus which has several lines with the same rythm.
It was sort of a combination of social commentary and then in the last verse self cryticism of that commentary, though goodness knows where some of the images came from with the quotation from Jon nacefield's poem "the wanderer " at the end sort of because it happened to feel as if it ought to go there.
Glad you sort of liked it.
Edited by dark empathy (07/27/13 09:59 AM)