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#454462 - 11/19/13 04:43 PM The Parts Department
BuffaloCO Offline


Registered: 07/14/12
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Loc: USA
removed on author's request...


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#454512 - 11/19/13 09:52 PM Re: The Parts Department [Re: BuffaloCO]
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Registered: 11/18/13
Posts: 39
Loc: Kentucky
Very nice. New parts indeed! Love the title. Keep walking my friend!
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#454520 - 11/19/13 11:26 PM Re: The Parts Department [Re: BuffaloCO]
traveler Offline
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Registered: 02/07/06
Posts: 3323
Loc: somewhere in Africa
BC -
and now you are more and more becoming a whole man - so much more than the sum of your parts!
LEE
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As my life goes on I believe somehow something's changed
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#454530 - 11/20/13 04:02 AM Re: The Parts Department [Re: BuffaloCO]
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Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 3146
Loc: O Kanada
you are the head of your department.
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#454837 - 11/22/13 10:06 PM Re: The Parts Department [Re: BuffaloCO]
BuffaloCO Offline


Registered: 07/14/12
Posts: 415
Loc: USA
Thanks guys. I was asked where this came from or why now? I don't know. My poems surface and I write is all I know. I added a line about the mind and heart. Perps don't see us as having either, just as something for them to use.
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#454844 - 11/22/13 10:51 PM Re: The Parts Department [Re: BuffaloCO]
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Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 412
Loc: Canada
a good man when I met you ...
building building
better better

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#454850 - 11/23/13 12:25 AM Re: The Parts Department [Re: BuffaloCO]
mattheal Offline
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Registered: 06/10/12
Posts: 142
Loc: Ohio
Buff,

You poem really touched me. The line:

An “it” to them and not a “me”.

It stunned me - almost like something Seuss could have written, simple words that covey through their precision what would take me paragraphs to say. Wow.

Thank you.
M

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#454870 - 11/23/13 10:14 AM Re: The Parts Department [Re: BuffaloCO]
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Registered: 10/06/13
Posts: 63
Buffalo,

I have to second Matt's comments and regarding that line in particular as well.

The entire poem meant a lot to me the moment I read it. Honestly, I am still at a point where I tear through this site and new posts like a starving man who's finally around food, several times a day (like right now). I don't always have a lot to say in reply to the things I read but so much of it helps me tremendously, this poem included. Thanks man.


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#454934 - 11/24/13 08:47 AM Re: The Parts Department [Re: BuffaloCO]
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Registered: 08/29/12
Posts: 585
smile

I didn't have anything more to add to what others have said...

Just...

smile
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#454963 - 11/24/13 09:59 PM Re: The Parts Department [Re: BuffaloCO]
BuffaloCO Offline


Registered: 07/14/12
Posts: 415
Loc: USA
Again guys, thanks. My writing is one thing no one could take from me and they tried. It helps me a lot to know my words mean something to others. I keep saying we have different stories and shared hurts. Words hurt us all and a lot I think, so when people say my words help, that really means a lot. It's making me cry just to say thanks so guess what, your words helped me 2. These are good tears this time.
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