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#82530 - 04/28/04 03:32 AM A little poem I just wrote
parttimecop Offline
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Registered: 03/05/04
Posts: 139
Sometimes the grace is pouring down
Sometimes I don't feel God At all
I carry that load that should never be laid on a man
I stumble, I nail Him to the cross
Yet when I stumble and fall
I feel that hand
Strong Across my back
Warmth and love
I know no worthiness of it
I carry that sin placed upon me
Why should such a load be placed
Why upon my shoulders was it lain
I can't really remember that Boy
Was I that boy then
What was to be of me
Open to the world
And then the door closed upon childhood
Innocence never to be seen again
How then to open
How then to be the man that boy should have been
To be open, to be whole


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#82531 - 04/28/04 05:49 PM Re: A little poem I just wrote
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Registered: 03/23/04
Posts: 508
Loc: Idaho
Wow!

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#82532 - 04/30/04 08:30 AM Re: A little poem I just wrote
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Registered: 12/19/03
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Loc: Pasadena, CA
Your poem is very moving and very well written -

You are really talented -

mgb

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#82533 - 05/05/04 05:18 AM Re: A little poem I just wrote
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Thanks, I thought it would be longer when I started it, but the inspiration kind of petered out.


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