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#82467 - 03/27/04 04:15 PM I Won't Back Down!
crisispoint Offline
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Registered: 09/24/03
Posts: 2154
Loc: Massachusetts
Hooookay, I'm gonna try to recreate this. Probably won't be as good as the first time, but what is in life?... \:D

I Won't Back Down!


(Inspired (yet again!) by "Won't Back Down" as performed by Fuel)

I've lived inside your pain.
(And the darkness that you bring.)
Hid inside my fear.
(Crawled from your shadow.)
Got tired of the shame.
(Which shouldn't be mine.)
I'm fighting back for my name.
(I'm coming for you!)

I won't back down!
I was lost but am found.
And I've come to bring you Hell!
I'll spread my wings,
Take back my things.
And I've come to give you Hell!

The power that you claimed
(and doesn't belong to you!)
Will no longer be yours!
(And the fear will be yours!)
I'll be silent no more!
(Everyone will know!)
Time to settle the score.
(I'm gunning for you!)

I won't back down!
I was lost but am found!
(And I've come to bring you Hell!)
I'm taking back my night
And take up the fight!
(I've come to give you Hell!)

I've come to bring you Hell!
I've come to give you Hell!
I've come to give you Hell!
I've come to bring you Hell!
I've come to bring you Hell
I've come to give you Hell!
I've come to bring you Hell!

I've come to take you down!


Nope, not as good, but it captures the idea somewhat. \:D

Peace and love,

Scot

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#82468 - 03/29/04 09:51 AM Re: I Won't Back Down!
crisispoint Offline
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Why the Hell was this deleted?

Some forethought and forewarning would've been nice.

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#82469 - 03/29/04 06:34 PM Re: I Won't Back Down!
Fred Tolson Offline
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Registered: 01/01/03
Posts: 375
Loc: Denver, CO
Hi Scot,

I don't believe anyone deleted it. (Mods, Admin) If anyone would have edited your post it would be indicated within your post. Please look at the bottom of this post to see the notice that is automatically inserted by the software when the original poster or a mod edits a post. As you see it doesn't appear in your above post you believe included your poem. The only way your post could not have it is for you to delete this thread and repost the thread without the poem. (I'm not saying you did this! \:\)


Below is the copy that is inserted.


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#82470 - 03/29/04 07:03 PM Re: I Won't Back Down!
crisispoint Offline
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Well, I sure didn't! And the whole THREAD would've been gone had I deleted it! (I know, I've done this)

Just feel badly. That was a good poem, and my backup failed, so I'm pretty sure it's gone. \:\(

Scot

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#82471 - 03/29/04 08:00 PM Re: I Won't Back Down!
Bill_1965 Offline
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Registered: 06/29/03
Posts: 1983
Loc: Flint, Michigan
Scot,

I saw this the night it was posted. What is there now is what I saw then. Which is why it made no sense to me.

Possibly it didn't cut and paste in like it should have. I don't know, I am as computer illiterate as I am poetically challenged.

Keep up the good writing, I enjoy reading them.

Sorry about the post poem, it sounds like it would have be inspirational.

Bill

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#82472 - 03/30/04 07:48 PM Re: I Won't Back Down!
Bill_1965 Offline
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Registered: 06/29/03
Posts: 1983
Loc: Flint, Michigan
Scot,

Now that wasn't there before.

It is very good, and I was right - it is inspirational.

Keep it up,
Bill

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