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#81221 - 03/19/03 08:26 AM
WARNING a dark poem form a dark night of the heart
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Registered: 03/02/03
Posts: 23
Loc: Australia
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No pity will come, no sorrow will come no friends will come, curious onlookers will pass see the dark then leave, no love can heal, no time can mend, the pain is endless, the hurt is great, but no pity will come no sorrow will come no friends will come
Only tears only hate only loathing, only disgust, only only only
This choice this man this life has made is at an end for the heart knows no more ways to heal no more ways to say sorry no more ways to despair for that which it has felt, that which it has seen that which it has done….
Only tears only hate only loathing, only disgust, only only only
In this life I was have wronged and have been wronged only the creator will look at me now only he can tell, only he might care for this heart, this soul that lies alone in his bed at night when the demons of the dark call again.
Only tears only hate only loathing, only disgust, only only only
The light is all but gone the hope is slim the fight is feeble and the voice is soft for words only wound word only carry lies, the heart has failed its simple test to be noble to be true, to be love and to be loved.
It is but a tear but hate but loathing I have for this heart this life this soul truly I need to be hurt all my days left for that is what I have done for what i allowed.
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as in all things we are all connected. Ho, Mitakaye Oyasin
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#81223 - 03/22/03 08:09 PM
Re: WARNING a dark poem form a dark night of the heart
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Moderator Emeritus MaleSurvivor
Registered: 07/15/02
Posts: 2080
Loc: Milwaukee, WI
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Hi woz,
It always saddens me to see the anguish our harm has caused us. But I do now actually believe that we need to forgive ourselves for our faults and mistakes and move on.
We were harmed in the pit of our spirits. I like the term soul murder. That is what it was. So, we need to let the warmth of healiing get us to the point where we stop pounding on ourselves for our pasts. Not easy, but truly necessary.
You writting is very powerful--I can see and feel your images. Kim is correct in encouraging you to use your poetry to express your feelings and eventually, I think you will begin to change how you see yourself.
Peace to you woz.
Bob
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#81224 - 03/22/03 09:43 PM
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Member MaleSurvivor
Registered: 12/04/01
Posts: 89
Loc: Ohio
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An excellent poem. I can deeply relate to what you are feeling. I wish there was something I could say that might help, It's just that I have yet to find something to help myself. Great work though.
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#81225 - 06/25/03 11:07 AM
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Member MaleSurvivor
Registered: 01/24/03
Posts: 310
Loc: Texas
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Remembering woz.
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Some Things are not problems to be solved, rather, they are facts which must be coped with over time.
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#81226 - 06/30/03 04:44 AM
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Registered: 06/12/03
Posts: 58
Loc: montana
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great poem , keep writting.
Laura
Aho,Mitakaye Oyasin. we are all relitives
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always be true to your self and your heart. dont forget to love yourself 1st, then the restwill fall into place.
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#81227 - 07/02/03 09:53 PM
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Member MaleSurvivor
Registered: 06/05/02
Posts: 740
Loc: Southern California
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Shedding a tear for the loss of Woz.
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And let the darkness fear our light.
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#81228 - 07/03/03 03:15 AM
Re: WARNING a dark poem form a dark night of the heart
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Member MaleSurvivor
Registered: 06/30/03
Posts: 31
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Edited by Kire1975 (07/18/08 02:51 AM)
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#81229 - 08/06/03 09:33 PM
Re: WARNING a dark poem form a dark night of the heart
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Member MaleSurvivor
Registered: 03/11/01
Posts: 2719
Loc: Virginia
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I didn't expect to see his nickname today. I wanted to get to austraila to see friends, woz is one I will not be able to see.
His pain was too much, and that is a sad truth. I will miss him. I hope others respond if they didn't get to earlier. Woz died earlier this year, incase new people do not know.
Thank you Woz for your thoughts,
always your friend
MJ
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