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#80427 - 05/17/05 03:51 PM My Monster (Triggers)
demonboi Offline
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Registered: 05/14/05
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Loc: East Coast


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Every corner, every city
There's a place where life's a little easy
Little Hennessy, laid back and cool
Every hour, cause it's all good
Leave all the stress from the world outside
Every wrong done will be alright
Nothin but peace, love
And street passion, every ghetto needs a thug mansion

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#80428 - 05/19/05 12:12 AM Re: My Monster (Triggers)
velvet Offline
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Registered: 05/17/05
Posts: 11
Loc: The Netherlands
*speechless*..


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#80429 - 05/19/05 03:58 AM Re: My Monster (Triggers)
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Registered: 08/07/04
Posts: 3389
Loc: Northern Wisconsin
Hi db,

Told you I'd come read your poetry - very powerfull stuff!

You are winning more each and every day,

TJ jeff

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Who will cry for the little boy? - I will... - Antwone Fisher

Abuse happens in silence/isolation - Recovery happens only when that silence/isolation is broken...

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#80430 - 05/19/05 04:32 AM Re: My Monster (Triggers)
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Posts: 228
Loc: East Coast
thanks. id show my sister but i don't want to upset her.

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Every corner, every city
There's a place where life's a little easy
Little Hennessy, laid back and cool
Every hour, cause it's all good
Leave all the stress from the world outside
Every wrong done will be alright
Nothin but peace, love
And street passion, every ghetto needs a thug mansion

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#80431 - 05/20/05 09:20 AM Re: My Monster (Triggers)
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Registered: 05/17/05
Posts: 11
Loc: The Netherlands
I can imagine that it would upset her.. it even upset me because of the vibe it has.. amazing the way you wrote that. I've experienced nothing like that but still I could almost imagining being that person.. creepy. However, if you really want her to know exactly how you felt, then you might eventually want to show her. I think this poem explains more than a whole conversation. Trigger is pretty bad though, so if she reads it make sure you stay close and tell her that it's in the past now 'n stuff. I don't know.. you know her and the situation best. Purely about the poem: it's extremely well written and sucks you right in.. amazing.


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#80432 - 05/20/05 10:11 AM Re: My Monster (Triggers)
reality2k4 Offline
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Registered: 07/06/04
Posts: 6838
Loc: Stuck between water, air, and ...
It is pretty steep, dont show it to your sister.
Poetry to me really moves, because it is a snap shot of life,

ste

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