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#80398 - 02/28/02 04:10 PM
Wounded
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Wounded
Wounded Child Crying in Corner Lost between the years
Crying out Silently No One Comes No One Hears
A Prison of Silence Surrounds Me, Into an Early Grave.
How do I start to Breath Again? Am I Someone's Slave?
A Wounded Child grows, As Does A Wounded Man.
The Wound Becomes My Sword. Like Tempered Steel, I am strong again, Oh my Lord.
A Wounded Man Sat Crying Lost Within his Years.
Silence at last was Broken Stattered Wounds Turned Into a River of Tears.
A Sword of Anger Broke me out, As I Yelled Screamed and Roared.
The Prison wasn't Mine at Last It Was Yours.
By M. Joseph
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#80399 - 03/15/02 09:17 AM
Re: Wounded
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The Prison wasn't mine at last it was Yours !
The abuse was not done by me, it was done by them. I must let go of their hold on me. This poem is about letting go of the abuse.
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#80400 - 03/24/02 01:39 PM
Re: Wounded
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Part of the letting go is in the writting of the poem. I still have a way to go. Spending more time on today instead of yesterday.
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#80401 - 03/25/02 02:02 PM
Re: Wounded
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michael Joseph,
Thank you for sharing. We are all on this journey, letting go of the 'prison' isn't easy. I agree it is not of our my making, but I stay there sometimes anyway...
Jim C. Hisatsinom
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#80402 - 05/27/02 03:30 PM
Re: Wounded
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thanks still12 and Jim C.
thanks for being on this journey with me.
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#80404 - 06/28/02 09:55 AM
Re: Wounded
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I guess we can all relate to this poem, remmeber who is in the prison cell. It is not me.
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#80405 - 08/20/02 04:25 PM
Re: Wounded
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go fly a kite, I hope you are ok
stay in touch somehow, don't just
fade away. We are all brothers here.
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#80406 - 09/02/02 06:43 PM
Re: Wounded
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Michael as much as I read and write, I have never been able to get into poetry, I've never been able to conjure up the images that I can when reading a novel.
But "Wounded" somehow got through to me, made startling images in my mind and moved me deeply, which I liked.
Thanks for that. Lloydy
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#80407 - 09/29/02 11:56 AM
Re: Wounded
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Thanks Loydy, I feel wonded right now.
I am sitting with the pain.
Michael Joseph
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