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#80341 - 05/06/05 02:37 PM Dream
Charlie Offline
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I dreamt I was a boat at sea.
An endless blue around me,
a soothing gentle breeze.

Safe, embraced by the colour blue.
The sea was like a father
and like a mother too.

It held me up like a precious child.
A small fishing boat
surrounded with light.


Charlie (age 13).


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#80342 - 05/06/05 02:44 PM Re: Dream
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Charlie,

Thanks for your poem this morning. Been going through a lot of stuff and when I read this it helped calm the little child inside.

Thanks.

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I can't come to the phone right now, I am out living my life

*** WoR Retreat Alumni - Alta 2005 ***

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#80343 - 05/06/05 04:21 PM Re: Dream
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Charlie, one day soon the lil boy dream come true, and he will find peace and tranquility all around him, his wish will come true,

ste

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#80344 - 05/07/05 08:09 PM Re: Dream
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#80345 - 05/07/05 08:41 PM Re: Dream
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It is a good poem, because it was written from what you felt at that time, and it shares the pain. The first poem is real good though.
I remember laying in the middle of a field looking up at the sun and clouds, being bathed in warm sunshine was where I wanted to be, forever.

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