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#80078 - 03/06/05 10:19 AM Please Don't Go There
Bobby Offline
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Registered: 12/01/04
Posts: 1287
Loc: Arizona
Do not go there
Things are bad there
In the bottom of my mind.

Please don't go there
People live there
It's no telling what you'll find.

There are things there
I have seen there
That are awful and unkind

Please don't go there
I have been there
At the bottom of my mind.

There's a child there
And he's naked
And he's burning in the fire

And he's looking
For his father
And his circumstance is dire

But he cannot find
His father
For his father is behind

And he reaches down
And grabs him
And he does things quite unkind

And the pain
The child will feel there
Will be horrible and true

And the pain
The child will feel there
will be torturous and new

And he will not
Trust a person
In his lifetime..not again

For the pain
Will keep good people out
It let bad people in.

Do not go there
Please don't go there
To the hell in which he lives

I must visit
Once a day there
With what comfort I can give

Once I tried to
Pull him out
But then my rope burned in the try.

And I haven't had
The nerve since
When he fell it made him cry.

So, don't go there
Please don't go there
To the bottom of my mind.

For I've seen
The things that live there
And they're evil and unkind.

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I'm healing now, and I wasn't sure I would.




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#80079 - 03/12/05 12:35 AM Re: Please Don't Go There
reality2k4 Offline
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Registered: 07/06/04
Posts: 6838
Loc: Stuck between water, air, and ...
Bobby, what a moving poem. You have visited the past, and know the pain.
You are safe from it now,

ste

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Whoever stole the Sun, put it back and we'll drop all the charges!

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#80080 - 03/17/05 12:55 AM Re: Please Don't Go There
Elad 12 Offline
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Registered: 02/15/05
Posts: 1176
Loc: on the coast
Powerful poem. Hard to read. Felt it deep in my soul. Thanks
Elad


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#80081 - 03/17/05 12:35 PM Re: Please Don't Go There
reality2k4 Offline
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Registered: 07/06/04
Posts: 6838
Loc: Stuck between water, air, and ...
I really felt for little Bobbie, it is very moving.

He is safe now,

look after him,

ste

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Whoever stole the Sun, put it back and we'll drop all the charges!

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