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#79850 - 10/08/06 09:43 PM Just a thought
reality2k4 Offline
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Registered: 07/06/04
Posts: 6838
Loc: Stuck between water, air, and ...
The little boy is too far gone
He is too far away
Not worth reviving
What could he say?

The doctors they stand
By the little boys bed
His eyes tightly closed
In comatose state

Leave me here I said
I have seen the light
From the dead
Life far from dread

As I met you oh Lord
You gave me back
Because its not my turn
So I head back to life

You promised me
When I was born to protect
You have shown me
The light within your Heaven

I thank you Oh Lord
To show me this light
But did it ever have to be
This way is so hard to follow

My Son, I protected you
Even through the darkest of times
I was there even through the
Darkest times of your life

But how? Do I know it is you
You have met me my son
And all you need to know
Is that you will know me again

You will know when your time
Is up on Earth, I will show you
I will guide you the same way
As you came to me to ask forgiveness

It was never your burden to carry so far

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#79851 - 10/08/06 10:08 PM Re: Just a thought
roadrunner Offline
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA
Ste,

Quote:
My Son, I protected you
Even through the darkest of times
I was there even through the
Darkest times of your life
I'm glad you believe this, my friend. I believe it too. But what's the next step? Surely to believe in that protection and support now as an adult.

Much love,
Larry

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Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
(Woody Guthrie)

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#79852 - 10/09/06 11:01 AM Re: Just a thought
Logan Offline
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Registered: 04/05/03
Posts: 1206
Loc: NY
WOW!

what great cadence!

I am but a humble amature at poetry. so i won't comment futher.

-Logan

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"Terrible thing to live in Fear"-Shawshank Redemption
WOR Alumnus Hope Springs 2009
"Quite a thing to live in fear, this is what is means to be a slave"
-Blade Runner

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#79853 - 10/09/06 08:30 PM Re: Just a thought
reality2k4 Offline
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Registered: 07/06/04
Posts: 6838
Loc: Stuck between water, air, and ...
I just opened word and let what I thought just flow, it was easy, not having to rhyme it, and it does mean something to me.

I am glad you liked it,

ste

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