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#79623 - 12/07/04 12:46 PM No Words
sadanddown Offline
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MaleSurvivor

Registered: 10/26/04
Posts: 191
Loc: Gaboogistan
This is kinda corny \:D but I wrote it to everyone that has helped me. My friends, and everyone here at MS. Thanks so much! Please feel free to pass this on to a friend, family member, or whoever has helped you if you'd like.


No Words-By Jon

Thank you so much
For you're assitance
It's times like these
That I need your persistance

I've no great words
With which to thank you
I'm just happy
Your helping me through

We both know
That I'm not quite there yet
But with your help
This should be no sweat

Sometimes its hard
For both of us it seems
But you've helped me already
To silence the screams

So I'll leave you
With one more short "thank you"
Something I say
Thats long overdue.

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I find I have to be the sad clown, laughing on the outside...crying on the inside.

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#79624 - 12/07/04 05:22 PM Re: No Words
swartzhund Offline
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Registered: 04/08/04
Posts: 61
Loc: Michigan
i don't think its corny at all. simple and to the point maybe but not corny. as with anything that involves emotion its hard to find the words and use them when you should. this is a nice way of doing that i think.

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Brian

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#79625 - 12/10/04 07:49 AM Re: No Words
Ivanhoe Offline
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Registered: 03/19/03
Posts: 1907
Jon,

I apologize for posting a poem in response to yours. I wasn't trying to, "one up," you. I just got carried away and posted away. I want your poem to stand without interference from me.
It is a beautiful poem and speaks eloquently to us.

I put mine under, "Repositioned."

David

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"No soul is desolate as long as there is a human being for whom it can feel trust and reverence."
George Eliot

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#79626 - 12/10/04 09:04 AM Re: No Words
sadanddown Offline
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Registered: 10/26/04
Posts: 191
Loc: Gaboogistan
Quote:
Originally posted by Ivanhoe:
Jon,

I apologize for posting a poem in response to yours. I wasn't trying to, "one up," you. I just got carried away and posted away. I want your poem to stand without interference from me.
It is a beautiful poem and speaks eloquently to us.

I put mine under, "Repositioned."

David
No worries \:D It didn't bother me

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I find I have to be the sad clown, laughing on the outside...crying on the inside.

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