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#78769 - 07/06/04 11:59 PM I Will Not
Happy Birthday yesac76 Offline
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Registered: 03/23/04
Posts: 508
Loc: Idaho
I will not be a toy
I will not be used
I will not be made sad
I will not be abused
I will not be a victim
I will not be forlorn
I will not be a prisoner
I will not live in scorn
I will not let you drag me down
I will not create more like you
I will not let you break me
I will not to myself be untrue
(This is not yet finished)

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#78770 - 07/07/04 04:39 AM Re: I Will Not
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What you have writen and shared so far is really good I am excited to see the rest of it. Thank you for sharing. This poem gives strength and courage to continue to fight everyone hear should read this. It is really to bad that you can't post it in the main forum. I hope with the topic I posted more will come to this forum and read what we have all writen. I wish you the best of luck my fried and keep writing you have a wonderful talent.

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#78771 - 07/08/04 12:59 AM Re: I Will Not
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(part II)
I will not dwell in pain
I will not live your lie
I will not shelter you deeds
I will not let me die
I will not shut my mouth
I will not remain in my cell
I will not give up on me
I will not save you from your Hell

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#78772 - 07/08/04 03:58 AM Re: I Will Not
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Well said and well writen yesac76, I really like it. As I suspected the ending is just as good as the biginning. Have you been published? If not you should really concider doing so you have a great gift. Thank you for sharing.

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#78773 - 07/08/04 10:57 AM Re: I Will Not
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Registered: 09/24/03
Posts: 2154
Loc: Massachusetts
Casey,

Aye, you shall not be anymore.

I'm glad for that.

Peace and love,

Scot

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#78774 - 07/08/04 01:31 PM Re: I Will Not
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I will not eaither, I am with you all the way.

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#78775 - 07/09/04 01:33 PM Re: I Will Not
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Registered: 07/05/04
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I will not accept any solution but my own.


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#78776 - 07/12/04 06:10 AM Re: I Will Not
Malidin41 Offline
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Loc: Utah
I will not eaither, you have writen a great poem. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

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#78777 - 07/23/04 04:17 PM Re: I Will Not
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Registered: 07/06/04
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Loc: Stuck between water, air, and ...
Hi Casey

nice poem, I will now have to find part one

thanks

ste

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#78778 - 07/23/04 04:20 PM Re: I Will Not
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by reality2k4:
[QB] Hi Casey

nice poem, it is a reflection on some of the stuff you went thru, thanks for sharing it

ste

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