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#72707 - 08/24/04 01:20 AM 'This place'
Kenn Offline
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Registered: 07/10/04
Posts: 146
Loc: Toronto, Canada
When Iím in pain
Thereís this place I go
It seems Iím there
Before I know

Whatís made me move
Inside or out
Makes me scream
With never a shout

Iíd like to yell
Till my throat got hoarse
But it's not likely I will
Being so composed of course

Itís a confusing place
But comfortable too
Being at ease in pain
Iíve become accustomed to

Itís not a pain
ďRate it one to tenĒ
But an ache, a dread
Of what to do when

Pain subsides
Or I get distracted
And start to believe
Iíve over-reacted

My fate unsure
The end unwritten
I could fall in love
Or at least be smitten

But how could I love
When Iíve always questioned
How things could be,
Details not mentioned

A secret between friends
Is safe with me
But a secret pain
Wonít set me free.

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"This above all; to thine own self be true."

William Shakespeare, Hamlet

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#72708 - 08/25/04 01:10 AM Re: 'This place'
Ivanhoe Offline
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Registered: 03/19/03
Posts: 1907
Geez, Kenn,

This is really good, can I move it to the poetry section, as well. I can leave it here, too, I just thought you'd like to share it for what it is...good poetry.

David

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"No soul is desolate as long as there is a human being for whom it can feel trust and reverence."
George Eliot

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#72709 - 08/25/04 07:17 AM Re: 'This place'
Kenn Offline
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Registered: 07/10/04
Posts: 146
Loc: Toronto, Canada
Sforgotten about there being a poetry section. Thanks for the feedback.

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"This above all; to thine own self be true."

William Shakespeare, Hamlet

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#72710 - 08/27/04 03:48 AM Re: 'This place'
Ivanhoe Offline
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Registered: 03/19/03
Posts: 1907
Kenn,

I sent your poem over to the Poetry section but have left this open, as well, so that others can comment, either place.

You write well,

David

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"No soul is desolate as long as there is a human being for whom it can feel trust and reverence."
George Eliot

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