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#452754 - 11/07/13 06:15 AM my poems
victor-victim Offline

Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 5364
Loc: O Kanada
these are my words.
some are recent, some are decades old.
different stages and moods that i have lived through,
during my life as victim and survivor.

some of these are still relevant today,
others are just pictures of past personalities.
reflections of my recovery.
sad and silly stories of my struggles.
twisted tales of my torments and tortures.

you can hear my story expressed in poems here.
explicit words set to aggressive music.
listen at your own risk.

hope you enjoy.

please feel free to feedback.
in fact, i urge you to react, respond and reply.
i welcome ALL comments, compliments and complaints.
rule number one
expresso manifesto
the art of exprexion
plan be
genesis revelation
emotional armour
science of conscience
solo soul
into me see
trust and truth
happiness happens
good medicine
hIDe your ID
picture in a locker
super fish hell (shallowater)
famiglia fatalità fatica
corruption incorporated
extinct instinct
power trip
loose cannon on deck of wild cards
nothing personal
courage of a coward
friendshipping & handling
improvised improvement
life in hell
c'est la vie du chien bâtard
great escape
ups & downs
bad seed
purge the urge
big bang theory
love is...
mon dieu
mon fiancé méfiance
meaning of life?
brahmanda birthday
in words, alas, drown i
transcendental medication
love is key
labour of love
freedom of obsession
get the message?
rave review rear view
to what end?

all my poems.


#472585 - 11/16/14 06:54 AM fishing for feedback [Re: victor-victim]
victor-victim Offline

Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 5364
Loc: O Kanada

do you like my poetry?
should i continue?
brothers, please talk to me.
i need to hear from you.

looking for love.
shameless self bump!
i need a shove.
help me over the hump.

looking for you.
i need your feedback.
give me your view.
get me on the right track.


a real appeal.
a genuine deal.
i heal, as i reveal,
and feel,
what i conceal.
c'est tres facile.


don't be shy.
just hit "REPLY".
write some $#!+
then hit "SUBMIT"



#474825 - 01/10/15 03:33 PM Re: fishing for feedback [Re: victor-victim]
OCN Offline

Registered: 02/05/13
Posts: 342
Loc: Western Europe
A big bump.. i think you're doing great in expressing yourself Victor! Please do continue! It helps me inspire creativity in myself, so your poetry is contagious!

Trust me, you are worth it to love yourself!

I now know who I am - I've never been anybody else!

#474832 - 01/10/15 04:56 PM Re: fishing for feedback [Re: victor-victim]
Shyshark Offline

Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 583
Loc: Canada
Well I am Shy ...
but I won't be shy.
We've discussed this before ... you and I ... and you know I'm in your corner.
I hope this won't be seen as criticism ...
because it is sincere feedback.
Victor ... there's too much!
I find myself running through your posts at a gallop and if I don't instantly see a 'personal' note,
I gallop on. It's just too exhausting ... and a lot of the time I don't understand or it has no relevance for me.
Your heart is in the right place ... but your fingers are running amok ... :P
I'm risking offense in order not to be a hypocrite ... I had to say something.
I don't spend much time in 'Poems' anymore for the exact same reason you've posted this.
I'm sick to death of busting my ass making submissions ... getting over a 100 hits ... and not a single reply,
other than the regulars ... which is what ??? 6 ... 8 ???
I'd rather someone take a second and say ... "This is shit!" ... rather than get nothing at all.
Granted ... a lot of my stuff is shit ... but there is some good stuff there too that doesn't get acknowledged.
I do keep up and read everyone's posts ... but I only reply now if it touches me in a personal way ... if I have something to say that is significant for either the poet or myself.
I know that's contrary to what I've just said about getting no replies ... but one can't reply to everything ...
and sometimes I'd like to but don't know what to say ... so I'm guilty too ...
but ...
considering the few posts submitted by only a few of us versus the 100's of people viewing ...
it's pretty damn discouraging.
Everybody out there ...
SAY SOMETHING!!! ... at least once in a while.

((( v-v )))
Experience is a brutal teacher.

#474834 - 01/10/15 05:13 PM Re: fishing for feedback [Re: victor-victim]
myrlin Offline

Registered: 11/19/14
Posts: 21
Loc: Minnesota
Don't stop

#474839 - 01/10/15 05:45 PM Re: fishing for feedback [Re: victor-victim]
victor-victim Offline

Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 5364
Loc: O Kanada
this is my curse.
this is my crime.
verse after verse.
rhyme after rhyme.
i am a lyricist.
this i cannot resist.

thank you for noticing.
thank you for everything.

--- personal note -----------------------
i am pleased to hear my words have reached and touched other souls.
feedback is food to me.



#481135 - 04/23/15 02:48 AM Re: fishing for feedback [Re: victor-victim]
victor-victim Offline

Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 5364
Loc: O Kanada
i fear and i crave human contact and intimacy.
acceptance, attention, approval, security.
to seek validation creates vulnerability.
i wish i could say i don't care what you think of me,
but sometimes i like to hear something from somebody.
you can be neutral or hostile or friendly.
all that i need is some feedback occasionally.


#481143 - 04/23/15 09:18 AM Re: fishing for feedback [Re: victor-victim]
GoodKiwi Offline

Registered: 01/30/15
Posts: 102
Loc: Luxembourg
Victor I have a little file on the desktop where I paste quotes from MS which help move me forward. You wrote many of them.

This one was about someone else but it really hit the mark.

family blood.
family ties.
family secrets.
family lies.

So true it hurts but in a good way.
The opposite of addiction is not sobriety. It is human connection.

#481230 - 04/25/15 10:07 AM Re: fishing for feedback [Re: victor-victim]
kellticwarrior Offline
New Here

Registered: 03/10/08
Posts: 92
Loc: vancouver,b.c.,canada
Victor, you should never post here to look for validation. we all love to see feedback on our work. But please post for yourself and yourself only. and never stop until you deem it done.
Love heals everything

#481241 - 04/25/15 03:27 PM Re: fishing for feedback [Re: victor-victim]
Shyshark Offline

Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 583
Loc: Canada
I'm still reading victor ... and trying to keep up ... and enjoying much of what I read.
Experience is a brutal teacher.

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