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#443590 - 08/07/13 01:48 AM echoes echoes echoes
Shyshark Offline

Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 617
Loc: Canada
not funny funny how it goes goes
today happy happy ... tip to tip to tip to toes
then ... tomorrow ... morrow ... really really really blows

seems to seems to seems to be ... the way way
changes changes changes ... day to day to day
it never seems I have a have a have a say

fears and tears and tears and fears
from old old ugly ugly old jeers
I wasn't sinning sinning yet yet ... but teens are mean are mean are mean
plain old plain old nasty nasty nasty peers

such a happy happy life
once upon a time a time a time
with my beloved loving loving wife
sinning sinning ...
torn torn ...
apart apart ...
with a jagged jagged jagged knife

then a man a man a man
a new a new a new beginning
a second second inning inning
no chance of winning winning
was really really sinning sinning

try try try yet another other one
young enough to be my be my be my son
that try too ... sinning sinning ... wasn't wasn't wasn't won

try again tried again to try again ... crazy crazy crazy me
I just shouldn't wouldn't couldn't seem to seem to seem to see
sinning sinning sinning sinning ...
i hadn't hadn't learned learned from all my history

something new new new ... three three three
men men men
no sinning sinning sinning...
each one each one each one ...
just a friend a friend a friend

two ... died ... died ... amen amen ...
third ... had to had to leave leave ... say amen

had enough enough enough
just wasn't wasn't tough tough
too too rough rough
couldn't take it take it
wouldn't make it make it make it

no more no more no more tries tries
no more no more goodbyes goodbyes
stayed alone alone alone
in my home home home
not life life ... no life no life not life
but ... no more no more no more strife
I wanted wanted wanted not
never ever never ever forget forgot
nothing's straight ... always ... always ... just a bend bend
always always turns turns ... into into an end an end an end

I've ventured forth ...

stupid stupid stupid me
just asking asking ... for yet another other tragedy
testing testing testing ..
vexing vexing vexing...
faith hope and destiny

so ... once again again again
here I here I here I sit
waiting waiting waiting
will it be the yawning gaping waiting pit ?
or can I can I can I ...
will I ... can I ... really really do it do it do it?

happiness happiness happiness
more or less or less or less
that's the test the test the test

I don't know know
who's to say say
changes changes changes...
from day to day to day

yeah ...
once again again again
I try the try the try the game
will things change change change ?
or stay the stay the stay the same

questions questions questions ... what will I get I get I get ?
answers answers answers ... not yet not yet not yet !

I hope you guys can read this ...
I almost went blind writing it!
Experience is a brutal teacher.

#443592 - 08/07/13 02:02 AM Re: echoes echoes echoes [Re: Shyshark]
victor-victim Offline

Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 5844
Loc: O Kanada
wow. built in echo.
that is an excellent style.
what a way to make a point.
hammer it home.
very haunting.

remember what Prince Rogers Nelson said...
"There's joy in repetition.
There's joy in repetition."


#443596 - 08/07/13 02:51 AM Re: echoes echoes echoes [Re: Shyshark]
Shyshark Offline

Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 617
Loc: Canada
thank you v-v

Experience is a brutal teacher.

#445143 - 08/22/13 05:21 PM Re: echoes echoes echoes [Re: Shyshark]
bluesky Offline

Registered: 08/04/13
Posts: 355
The echos of the mind make us blind
that's our fate you and mine
until that switch oh so big do I click
quieting the screams in my head

Where the fear has gone there will be nothing.
Only I will remain."
Frank Herbert

#445829 - 08/29/13 04:20 AM Re: echoes echoes echoes [Re: Shyshark]
Shyshark Offline

Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 617
Loc: Canada
the pounding in my head
the boom boom boom
echoes ...
like a death rattle
in a tomb tomb tomb
I fight so hard in this battle
desperately hoping to find peace
soon soon soon
but until
then then then
I'll have to tough it out
and wait wait wait
for when when when
Experience is a brutal teacher.


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