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#441678 - 07/22/13 12:21 AM The end result of messing up too many times
bey Offline

Registered: 01/28/10
Posts: 374
Loc: canada
I miss you

Is the most reasonable thing I can't say tonight

I miss you so much
And I'm so sorry
And I want to be ok
And I want to be enough
And I will stay clean
And I will stop screwing and screwing up
I miss you
I miss you
Come home

I should call

Instead I sit and write terrible poetry
And smoke
And think about how I should call you and tell you
I miss you

And I'm sorry.

Please come home.
I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration. I will face my fear. I will permit it to pass over me and through me.

#441683 - 07/22/13 12:44 AM Re: The end result of messing up too many times [Re: bey]
victor-victim Offline

Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 5876
Loc: O Kanada
there really is no such thing as "terrible poetry" if it comes straight from the soul kitchen.

your poem gives me a taste of longing, loss and loneliness.

add a teaspoon of regret, remorse and reluctance.



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