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#441540 - 07/20/13 10:48 PM Tonight
bey Offline


Registered: 01/28/10
Posts: 206
Loc: canada
I took a walk downtown tonight cuz the air was getting thick
Looking for something to hold cuz the last one didn't stick
Just want someone to hear me out I promise I'll come quick
My repirtiore is getting played I'm down to my last trick

The night is made of wolves and sheep I'm tired of being prey
Sometimes we just get stuck in the old games we used to play
So if you ask me nice I will fall to my knees and pray
So I can let this sickness go and live another day

This place is full of queens and rooks I'm feeling like a pawn
Can't move too fast on shaky ground I'm trying to hang on
I just need to fall in love from dusk until the dawn
To find my shoes under your bed by morning I'll be gone

My vision's getting cloudy here with smoke all in my eyes
I can't see straight can't figure out my future paralized
My heart is on my sleeve but man my pockets full of lies
Sometimes I feel less like a man than a child in disguise

There are too many strangers here I got to know too well
My only chance is in my pants so many lies I tell
I tried to get to heaven but I lost my step and fell
I landed here outside his door and stopped to ring his bell

I took a walk downtown tonight cuz the air was getting thick
Just looking for someone to hold cuz the last one didn't stick
It doesn't need to be for long I don't care if we click
Just need to take my medicine I'm tired of being sick

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#441742 - 07/22/13 12:34 PM Re: Tonight [Re: bey]
peroperic2009 Offline
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Registered: 10/09/11
Posts: 3617
Loc: South-East Europe
Oh man this is beautiful and sad. You are great with words I hope he has seen it wink

Pero
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#441810 - 07/22/13 09:56 PM Re: Tonight [Re: bey]
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Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 416
Loc: Canada
Awesome!

There are so many ways that what you wrote can be read ...
interpreted.

The nuances are intriguing ...
and in one of the versions mulling over in my mind ...

all too familiar.

Great work bey.

(I warned you ... lol ... I'm watching you.)
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#441812 - 07/22/13 10:12 PM Re: Tonight [Re: bey]
Shyshark Online   sad


Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 416
Loc: Canada
One line in particular was piercing ...

" I just need to fall in love from dusk until the dawn "

Story of my life.

I was in love
I had it all
but the love I craved
was the love that lasts
from dusk til dawn

pride goeth before the fall
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#441851 - 07/23/13 07:11 AM Re: Tonight [Re: bey]
bey Offline


Registered: 01/28/10
Posts: 206
Loc: canada
"I was in love
I had it all
but the love I craved
was the love that lasts
from dusk til dawn"

ya
thats pretty much it

thanks shy shark

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#441866 - 07/23/13 11:08 AM Re: Tonight [Re: bey]
foreverloved Offline


Registered: 02/16/13
Posts: 12
Loc:
Great job you are very talanted smile

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