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#435609 - 05/23/13 08:17 PM anger
victor-victim Offline


Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 3365
Loc: O Kanada
NEAR the POINT of no RETURN
MAYBE SECONDS till it HAPPENS
i'm a WALKING TIME BOMB hear me TICKING
TALKING BIG BANG THEORY

BIG BANG!

HIGH PRESSURE ... TIGHT WIRE
HAIR TRIGGER ... DETONATOR
i'm a WALKING TIME BOMB hear me
TICKING TALKING BIG BANG THEORY

BIG BANG!

KILL the CLOCK but TIME WON'T STOP
E WILL EQUAL M C SQUARED

SPONTANEOUS COMBUSTION ... VOLCANIC ERUPTION
TOTAL DESTRUCTION ... IN YOUR FACE

CAN'T HOLD IT IN ... OVERLOAD
LOOK OUT ... I'M ABOUT TO EXPLODE

WHITEHOT SUNDROP
MULTIMEGATONIC SUBATOMIC SUPERNOVA



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more of my poetry...
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=434387#Post434387
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=441089#Post441089
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthr...3020#Post433020
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=441024#Post441024
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=432554#Post432554
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthr...5609#Post435609
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=434805#Post434805
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#441470 - 07/20/13 12:28 PM Re: anger [Re: victor-victim]
Jak Offline


Registered: 07/18/13
Posts: 5
I know I have a temper like that too but I manage to keep it under my tectonic plates. Good poem too btw.
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#441486 - 07/20/13 04:30 PM Re: anger [Re: victor-victim]
victor-victim Offline


Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 3365
Loc: O Kanada
thank you so much.
i do so appreciate feedback.
i have always put everything i have into my poems.

they mean a lot to me.
in fact, i used to call them "my children",
until i had real children.

here is this poem set to music and images of rage.
warning: trigger! (tantrums)
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