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#205360 - 02/15/08 06:34 PM I wish I had world to live in like you do
dancr6 Offline
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Registered: 12/02/07
Posts: 383
Loc: georgia
I ran really fast with the hope of catching up
But the minute I got there you sped quickly away
I gave you what I thought you liked
As I waited for your smile I saw a look of disgust
I wondered what I could do to win your love
But my death was more than I could give

I guess I hadnít realized how invisible I was
Maybe I never existed to anyone
A little boy in a singular enclosed world
Watching outward with no hope of inclusion
Lonely existence in a world so full


Youíre so lucky to belong to the world
You can be flawed and still be loved
You can scream with anger and be soothed
You can play the fool and be known for your humor
You can make a mistake and itís overlooked
You can say what you feel without remorse

I walk on thin ice with every step
My words must be gentle and precise
My anger is not allowed
I am defined by my mistakes and missteps
I measure the feelings I can disclose by the expression you show

I wish I had a world to live in like you do

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#205361 - 02/15/08 06:38 PM Re: I wish I had world to live in like you do [Re: dancr6]
Freedom49 Offline
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Registered: 12/30/07
Posts: 2723
Loc: Washington State
What I hate is that the thought your expressing is so common here. That to me is so sad. You express it so very well with your poem. Reading it makes my heart ache for that one outcast. Thanks for expressing that so well here.


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#205362 - 02/15/08 06:44 PM Re: I wish I had world to live in like you do [Re: Freedom49]
dancr6 Offline
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I wish that knowing others feel the same way was more comforting but it makes me a little more angry at the people who think their comfort in the world is because the've done something right.
I wish you couldn't relate but apparently you do. I think your doing a great job of soothing your pain and the pain of us all.
Thanks Roger,

Dan

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#205528 - 02/16/08 05:20 PM Re: I wish I had world to live in like you do [Re: dancr6]
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Loc: Arizona
Wow! I understand this one too well, Dan. Wish I could offer some solutions. If I could, I wouldn't be riding in that same boat with you. Maybe if we just row a little harder towards the other shore.......

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#205538 - 02/16/08 06:05 PM Re: I wish I had world to live in like you do [Re: Bobby]
dancr6 Offline
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Loc: georgia
I sounds as if we are all getting closer and rowing with ya"ll makes getting to the "other shore" more hopeful.

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#205552 - 02/16/08 07:42 PM Re: I wish I had world to live in like you do [Re: dancr6]
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Loc: 2.5 NATO Nations
That's really good Dan. Its quite similar to how I feel as a space alien here on this planet.

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#205661 - 02/17/08 09:10 AM Re: I wish I had world to live in like you do [Re: Still]
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA
Dan,

You speak for many guys when you write this. I can see from your posts that you're going through a rough spot now. I hope your writing and our responses will help.

Much love,
Larry

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Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
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#205665 - 02/17/08 09:20 AM Re: I wish I had world to live in like you do [Re: roadrunner]
dancr6 Offline
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Registered: 12/02/07
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Loc: georgia
Tremendously!!! Thanks

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#440833 - 07/14/13 02:21 AM Re: I wish I had world to live in like you do [Re: dancr6]
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Posts: 3333
Loc: O Kanada
very strong and bitter taste to this one.
hard to swallow.
how often i have felt this way.
you have managed to document this feeling honestly.
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