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#437712 - 06/10/13 08:15 PM Onwards We Must Go
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Edited by concerned_husky (08/30/15 06:24 AM)
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#437759 - 06/11/13 07:52 AM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Husky-
This is strong, and peaceful, and beautiful. The images of starlight, and mountains looking on, and wildflowers in bloom, and whispers long gone.... a song of eternal hope. I wish I were there now. Angels, my friend.
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#437771 - 06/11/13 10:13 AM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Edited by concerned_husky (08/30/15 06:34 AM)
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#437788 - 06/11/13 12:58 PM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Now you're a talented poet, too. What other talents have you been hiding from us!?

I'm usually wary of anaphora outside of Blake, but I think it works here and actually fits with the overall piece. Very nice, sir.
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#437825 - 06/11/13 04:53 PM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Edited by bodyguard8367 (02/27/14 04:10 PM)

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#437977 - 06/12/13 07:11 PM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Edited by concerned_husky (08/30/15 06:36 AM)
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#438320 - 06/15/13 10:58 PM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Very well constructed man. Great moral backing, despite everything we move on. You have captured recovery very well and like others have said, you are a good poet wink

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