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#437712 - 06/10/13 08:15 PM Onwards We Must Go
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Edited by concerned_husky (08/30/15 06:24 AM)
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"It is sad to see a young man's fondest hopes and dreams shattered when the rose-colored veil is plucked away and he sees the actions and feelings of men for what they are. But he still has the hope of replacing his old illusions with others, just as fleeting, but also just as sweet." - Lermontov

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#437759 - 06/11/13 07:52 AM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Husky-
This is strong, and peaceful, and beautiful. The images of starlight, and mountains looking on, and wildflowers in bloom, and whispers long gone.... a song of eternal hope. I wish I were there now. Angels, my friend.
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#437771 - 06/11/13 10:13 AM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Edited by concerned_husky (08/30/15 06:34 AM)
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"It is sad to see a young man's fondest hopes and dreams shattered when the rose-colored veil is plucked away and he sees the actions and feelings of men for what they are. But he still has the hope of replacing his old illusions with others, just as fleeting, but also just as sweet." - Lermontov

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#437788 - 06/11/13 12:58 PM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Now you're a talented poet, too. What other talents have you been hiding from us!?

I'm usually wary of anaphora outside of Blake, but I think it works here and actually fits with the overall piece. Very nice, sir.
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#437825 - 06/11/13 04:53 PM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Edited by bodyguard8367 (02/27/14 04:10 PM)

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#437977 - 06/12/13 07:11 PM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Edited by concerned_husky (08/30/15 06:36 AM)
Edit Reason: Reducing ties with MS.
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"It is sad to see a young man's fondest hopes and dreams shattered when the rose-colored veil is plucked away and he sees the actions and feelings of men for what they are. But he still has the hope of replacing his old illusions with others, just as fleeting, but also just as sweet." - Lermontov

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#438320 - 06/15/13 10:58 PM Re: Onwards We Must Go [Re: concerned_husky]
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Very well constructed man. Great moral backing, despite everything we move on. You have captured recovery very well and like others have said, you are a good poet wink

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