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#80577 - 04/22/02 08:31 PM The Prison
James_dup1 Offline


Registered: 04/13/02
Posts: 1332
Loc: Wyoming
The prison

As I pace back and forth in my cell
No windows
No bars
Only one guard
Waiting for the time to come
Waiting for my turn in the gas chamber
Longing for it all to be over
As the guard approaches my cell
I stare in disbelief
It can't be
It's not possible
I stare at him
Trying to understand how
As I stare at him
I see me

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#434892 - 05/16/13 10:33 PM Re: The Prison [Re: James_dup1]
victor-victim Offline


Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 3327
Loc: O Kanada
this has strong visuals, like a mini twilight zone episode complete with irony and surprise ending. well done.
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