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#409154 - 09/05/12 11:14 PM Lesson - dedicated to MarkK
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Lesson (dedicated to MarkK - who will understand)

i am a lower case letter -
self-deprecating, minimizing,
trying to be unnoticed,
uncertain that there is a right
to be seen or heard.

sometimes that 1st person (pronoun)
disappears altogether
and there is no subject to the predicate;
it is assumed – or lapses into passive voice,
an error forbidden to students.

and possessive pronouns
have also been censured and censored,
one can only guess what belongs to whom.
But 2nd and 3rd persons are fine.
YOU & THEY get all the action and possessions
– in ALL CAPS!

lee
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We are often troubled, but not crushed;
sometimes in doubt, but never in despair;
there are many enemies, but we are never without a friend;
and though badly hurt at times, we are not destroyed.
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#409218 - 09/06/12 12:13 PM Re: Lesson - dedicated to MarkK [Re: traveler]
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This is great dear low case smile
I would like so much if MarK could give some comment in poetic way no matter on letter case smile
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#409381 - 09/07/12 12:43 PM Re: Lesson - dedicated to MarkK [Re: traveler]
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from lower case to lower case
     i greet you
a friend you have been
     and i expect will remain

and yes, i do understand
     how i can be small
           but YOU can be huge
        ... or at least all caps

           a secret - from me to you
i've been told we don't quite disappear
     completely
if we have true friends
     they can still see us
           though they will see the diminutive case
           and understand
     it just won’t matter
  you know ...
    ... they won't go into all cap mode ...
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#409396 - 09/07/12 03:08 PM Re: Lesson - dedicated to MarkK [Re: traveler]
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#409449 - 09/07/12 10:39 PM Re: Lesson - dedicated to MarkK [Re: traveler]
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this is SOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oops - did i just use all caps?

i am laughing and crying at the same time.

thanks, friends!
you are all so great.

LEE
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We are often troubled, but not crushed;
sometimes in doubt, but never in despair;
there are many enemies, but we are never without a friend;
and though badly hurt at times, we are not destroyed.
- Paul, II Cor 4:8-9

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#409464 - 09/08/12 01:42 AM Re: Lesson - dedicated to MarkK [Re: traveler]
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Cool indeed!!!
I LOVE YOU all my brothers:
LEE our artistic master of letters,
MarK sometimes the most cheerful/spiritual person here wink
Geoff almost like my older bro

Lately I've been stuck with a lot of problems about which I can't talk nor make some change
my fate is just to sit and wait
so I went from low to even lower case
and currently I'm lost in subscript characters
but it is genuine how much good can bring
play with tiny things as letters are
by GREAT people as YOU THREE!
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#409674 - 09/10/12 09:01 AM Re: Lesson - dedicated to MarkK [Re: peroperic2009]
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Originally Posted By: peroperic2009
MarK sometimes the most cheerful/spiritual person here wink
So who's been impersonating me online??
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#409810 - 09/11/12 08:55 AM Re: Lesson - dedicated to MarkK [Re: MarkK]
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Someone told me that is one hell of a guy called MarkK.
I've meet him couple of times in chat room, he was hilarious, everyone there was laughing, beside that he is making beautiful music and writes poetry with such easy!
You should meet him sometimes, I think that you two have a lot to talk about smile

Pero
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