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#406954 - 08/15/12 09:47 PM Diary of a Hollow Boy
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Diary Of A Hollow Boy


Nothing can BE hollow unless its first filled. Its simply not possible. Something had to push-out the features...the features people saw...the vary features that caused the hollowing...the hollowing of the boy.

Day One:

Riches! Holy God In Heaven --- RICHES shower down! What’s this thing called LIFE!!
Touch! Feel! Hear! Smell! Love! See!

Wind over the face! My God this bike!!!! This fear! This electric emotion!!! Holy God!!!
I Can Fly!!!
I am a GOD!
Am am spectacular! Holy God!!!
This is LIFE and I’m bathing in it forever!

Learning Day:

What’s this thing called “frog?”
A “forest?” its called “forest???”
This is mine now! I call it!
Tis mine!!!

That Sprite....she’s mine too!
My wife!
My lover!
But you may bask near-by.

I need nothing more than this!!!

Then God? What is Heaven like??
Holy God!
What is heaven like?

The Sun Goes Dark:

The sea turns to blood
The air, to poison
Fire all around

I asked you God...
What is Heaven like?
You pitched me into...
you burned me with...
Twas not you?
I knew it!
Twas the Dark One that gouged my gut!

A dagger works fast on a small boy.
Even a King like me.
Death and rot comes fast
Even to a King like me!

They speak of love?
They speak of the moon and stars?

I see only black
Only death

I see

I die

I’m just a hollow man.


Edited by Robbie Brown (08/15/12 09:50 PM)
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#407068 - 08/17/12 09:48 AM Re: Diary of a Hollow Boy [Re: Still]
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Edited by bodyguard8367 (02/26/14 07:58 PM)
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#473606 - 12/15/14 08:30 PM Re: Diary of a Hollow Boy [Re: Still]
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Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 4801
Loc: O Kanada
this is really good.

especially enjoyed the third part.

excellent.
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