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#402139 - 06/29/12 11:17 AM How to turn a little boy into a Poet
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#402157 - 06/29/12 03:21 PM Re: How to turn a little boy into a Poet [Re: bodyguard8367]
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Wow... I can imagine this one as a song. Love your style.

Alex
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#402177 - 06/29/12 09:35 PM Re: How to turn a little boy into a Poet [Re: bodyguard8367]
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this is good.
the following lines especially speak to me:

"how to grasp the impossible?
Say the unsayable?
Mourn the loss of that which still haunts?
feast on vengeance yet become not evil?

...

I sing odes and lullabys to a stony faced reticent boy
who knows what I know....
that trust was betrayed...
that Monsters are real....

...

I didn't know this would turn out...it still may not...but what other choice do I have?

Through the looking Glass I walk to rescue my past,
I am his fortress, his champion,
and I will banish the monster.......
no matter how hard this is. "

i appreciate your work.
lee
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#402283 - 07/01/12 11:18 AM Re: How to turn a little boy into a Poet [Re: bodyguard8367]
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#402298 - 07/01/12 03:05 PM Re: How to turn a little boy into a Poet [Re: bodyguard8367]
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Your works are awesome, some of them are hard to read for me cos mostly i can relate to them but i love your writings and your style. I know what you´re talkin bout with people not seeing what´s behind. Don´t let them discourage you, we love and need your pieces. And yeah i like the song too though the Metallica´s version more.

Alex
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#402311 - 07/01/12 06:23 PM Re: How to turn a little boy into a Poet [Re: bodyguard8367]
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#402330 - 07/02/12 01:37 AM Re: How to turn a little boy into a Poet [Re: bodyguard8367]
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So amazing and deep... keep sharing... even if it is dark is is truly awesome and amazing... its an honor to know you Geoff..

and yes i agree with Alex, i know the song but like metallica's version better.. both are good versions though...
if you haven't already here it is
http://youtu.be/C5vSIu_ERm8

Jayy
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#402465 - 07/03/12 11:24 AM Re: How to turn a little boy into a Poet [Re: bodyguard8367]
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#402487 - 07/03/12 02:35 PM Re: How to turn a little boy into a Poet [Re: bodyguard8367]
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Psychic Wars-

One of those rare moments where I say - Yes. That's it. How perfect an explanation for the trials I've experienced. A beautiful example. Great post man.
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