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#402017 - 06/28/12 07:53 AM "Dear Sir" *warning, I guess*
alex05 Offline


Registered: 05/29/12
Posts: 59
Loc: nowheresville
I´m kinda new to this poetry stuff so it´s not any masterpiece, compared to all these awesome pieces you guys posted but I´ve tried...

"Sorry Sir" he had to say
when he was standin in your way.
Nobody he ever told
bout the dark secret we hold.

Now he´ll try to tell
bout the little boy who was for sale.
Clients comin every day
with a new sadistic game to play.

Proudly you said "That´s my boy"
when you let him be their toy.
And this naive little boy
did anything to please your evil soul.

Raped, cut, beaten nevermind
you just watched and laughed out loud.
Scared too much to make a sound
just to see his Daddy proud.

When the knife slashed his young skin
salt they put to make him scream.
After they left was your turn
"best for last" in his head still burn.

The fear inside him never shown
not a tear cried till they´re gone.
Bleeding body, tortured soul
House of Horror he called home.

Scared of people now he is
human he learned is the worst beast.
Still despite all you´ve done
he longs to hear "I love you, son."
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#402044 - 06/28/12 10:24 AM Re: "Dear Sir" *warning, I guess* [Re: alex05]
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Registered: 02/07/06
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Loc: somewhere in Africa
alex -
you've not only tried - but also succeeded - with great eloquence!
lee
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Something deep inside...
I've been searchin so long to find an answer
Now I know my life has meaning
Now I see myself as I am, feeling very free...
When my tears have come to an end I will understand
What I left behind: a part of me. Chicago


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#402060 - 06/28/12 01:55 PM Re: "Dear Sir" *warning, I guess* [Re: alex05]
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Edited by bodyguard8367 (02/26/14 06:59 PM)
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#402120 - 06/29/12 04:02 AM Re: "Dear Sir" *warning, I guess* [Re: alex05]
alex05 Offline


Registered: 05/29/12
Posts: 59
Loc: nowheresville
Thanks guys!

I was a bit sceptical bout it first but really helps a LOT to get some heavy things off my chest.

Alex
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#402124 - 06/29/12 07:22 AM Re: "Dear Sir" *warning, I guess* [Re: alex05]
peroperic2009 Offline
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Registered: 10/09/11
Posts: 3603
Loc: South-East Europe
Hey Alex, even it must be hard to talk about such terrible experience you are doing very eloquently trough poetry. Just keep sharing with us wink
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#402158 - 06/29/12 03:24 PM Re: "Dear Sir" *warning, I guess* [Re: alex05]
alex05 Offline


Registered: 05/29/12
Posts: 59
Loc: nowheresville
Thanks buddy.
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#402159 - 06/29/12 03:31 PM Re: "Dear Sir" *warning, I guess* [Re: alex05]
dragon Offline


Registered: 04/17/12
Posts: 355
Loc: on the river between Hades n V...
you've done a great job and did it with eloquence. Very awesome. Keep sharing. poetry is honestly however you write you. it can't be wrong or right. You did succeed.

Jayy
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I want justice I want you overthrown;I want courage I want to stand alone;I want your arrogance and I want your pain;I want your everything and I want you dead--- Rev Theory: Justice

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#402165 - 06/29/12 05:57 PM Re: "Dear Sir" *warning, I guess* [Re: alex05]
alex05 Offline


Registered: 05/29/12
Posts: 59
Loc: nowheresville
Thanks Jayy, appreciated a lot.
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#402190 - 06/30/12 04:21 AM Re: "Dear Sir" *warning, I guess* [Re: alex05]
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Registered: 11/03/11
Posts: 149
Loc: USA
What Traveler said -

Extremely eloquent, and very striking. You've more than succeeded. Keep at it, you're doing better with it than you give yourself credit for.
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#402238 - 06/30/12 05:49 PM Re: "Dear Sir" *warning, I guess* [Re: alex05]
alex05 Offline


Registered: 05/29/12
Posts: 59
Loc: nowheresville
Thanks a lot!

Alex
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