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#397517 - 05/17/12 12:54 PM Seen and not heard.......
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#397523 - 05/17/12 01:21 PM Re: Seen and not heard....... [Re: bodyguard8367]
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You speak for a great many who cannot, Geoff, this is raw and powerful, a tribute to the attention you have given to caring for the child. True, for now he is coy and uncooperative, but a time will come, shortly, and he will remember, and will smile for you.

Thank you for sharing,
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#397539 - 05/17/12 03:06 PM Re: Seen and not heard....... [Re: bodyguard8367]
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#397687 - 05/18/12 07:13 PM Re: Seen and not heard....... [Re: bodyguard8367]
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very powerful and to the great point that we all know. well done.. i love it

Jayy
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#397698 - 05/18/12 08:07 PM * [Re: bodyguard8367]
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#398109 - 05/22/12 09:11 PM Re: Seen and not heard....... [Re: bodyguard8367]
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Geoff,

For me the portion of this poem that spoke the loudest was your fear of the silence ďa quiet stampedeĒ A brilliant line disclosing how loud and crushing silence is. Thanks for sharing with us; Iíll look forward to more of your sharing through your poetry
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#398117 - 05/22/12 09:35 PM Re: Seen and not heard....... [Re: bodyguard8367]
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"cup with no bottom"

- very accurate & powerful image!

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#399031 - 05/31/12 05:08 PM Re: Seen and not heard....... [Re: bodyguard8367]
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#437328 - 06/07/13 07:12 PM Re: Seen and not heard....... [Re: bodyguard8367]
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#437344 - 06/07/13 08:17 PM Re: Seen and not heard....... [Re: bodyguard8367]
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i HEAR you, Geoff.
loud and clear.
remember horton?
"we are here. we are here. we are here!"

Matt 11:15 He that hath ears to hear, let him hear.
Matt 13:09 Who hath ears to hear, let him hear.
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