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#385037 - 02/09/12 09:02 AM with the best of intentions
MarkK Offline
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Registered: 04/02/07
Posts: 2472
Loc: Denver, CO
so busy building
      strengthening walls
            adding the best bricks
                  so nothing falls

quick-setting mortor
      to hold all in place
            hands moving swiftly
                  as if in a race

security everything
      safety comes first
            keeping out danger and evil
                  or worse

too late i notice
      and there is no doubt
            instead of sheltering myself in
                  i've walled myself out

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the words
    http://csarj.blogspot.com/
the music
    http://www.restorativeworship.com/
the book
    https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/94948?ref=mbkrueger

Kirkridge - October 2008
Alta - September 2012

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#385052 - 02/09/12 12:06 PM Re: with the best of intentions [Re: MarkK]
Sobernow Offline


Registered: 05/17/10
Posts: 256
Loc: Oklahoma
its so sad that in many cases that is exactly what we have done.


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#385150 - 02/10/12 08:39 AM Re: with the best of intentions [Re: MarkK]
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Registered: 02/08/12
Posts: 158
Loc: Ontario Canada
Wow you said an awful lot with so few words... thanky you for sharing.

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I will never ALWAYS be right, I wasn't wrong, I am whats left.

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#385231 - 02/10/12 09:22 PM Re: with the best of intentions [Re: Treehugger75]
MarkK Offline
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Registered: 04/02/07
Posts: 2472
Loc: Denver, CO
thanx guys smile

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the words
    http://csarj.blogspot.com/
the music
    http://www.restorativeworship.com/
the book
    https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/94948?ref=mbkrueger

Kirkridge - October 2008
Alta - September 2012

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#385420 - 02/12/12 03:09 AM Re: with the best of intentions [Re: MarkK]
traveler Offline


Registered: 02/07/06
Posts: 2442
Loc: overseas
Well said!
Clear message
powerful images
authentic.

Lee

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They have greatly oppressed me from my youth, but they have not gained the victory over me.
Plowmen have plowed my back and made their furrows long.
But the Lord is righteous; he has cut me free from the cords of the wicked.
Psalm 129:2-4

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#385677 - 02/14/12 01:42 AM Re: with the best of intentions [Re: MarkK]
Tyler845 Offline


Registered: 11/04/10
Posts: 252
Loc: U.S.A.
Important reminder MarkK

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Most Often- The Child Inside Has Better Access To The Ability To Execute The Flawless Potential Of Self.

http://pl.st/s/478963729

YOUR - Focus Changes Everything.

"Come unto Me, all ye that Labor, and are Heavy-ladened. I will give you Rest" -Jesus Christ

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#386050 - 02/16/12 12:45 PM Re: with the best of intentions [Re: Tyler845]
MarkK Offline
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Registered: 04/02/07
Posts: 2472
Loc: Denver, CO
thanx Lee, Tyler

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the words
    http://csarj.blogspot.com/
the music
    http://www.restorativeworship.com/
the book
    https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/94948?ref=mbkrueger

Kirkridge - October 2008
Alta - September 2012

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#386169 - 02/17/12 08:22 AM Re: with the best of intentions [Re: MarkK]
GoHomeAgain Offline
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Registered: 02/02/10
Posts: 101
Loc: Pennsylvania
That's beautiful.

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Humble Alumnus of WoR Dahlonega 2011.

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#387105 - 02/24/12 05:09 PM Re: with the best of intentions [Re: GoHomeAgain]
MarkK Offline
Member
MaleSurvivor

Registered: 04/02/07
Posts: 2472
Loc: Denver, CO
Thanx GHA

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the words
    http://csarj.blogspot.com/
the music
    http://www.restorativeworship.com/
the book
    https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/94948?ref=mbkrueger

Kirkridge - October 2008
Alta - September 2012

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#387183 - 02/25/12 06:49 AM Re: with the best of intentions [Re: MarkK]
earlybird Offline
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Registered: 02/17/10
Posts: 1007
Loc: WA USA
Wonderful poem (sad as hell) and an interesting one on the heels of your “time marches on” poem. Both carry a powerful message clearly presented and hopefully in doing so you’ll see that you your poems are a wonderful way of unstacking the bricks and that you are not as alone as you may feel.

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Balanced (My goal)

There is symmetry
In self-reflection
Life exemplified
Grace personified

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