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#371045 - 09/25/11 09:07 PM Left Behind
StAiNeD Offline


Registered: 06/27/11
Posts: 17
Loc: The Bronx
No life for you, little angel
To fear the shadow lurking in your corner
The twin of he who broke your precious wings
To sleep in borrowed beds

A perfectly constructed prison
With every word they bind you
And leave you cruelly tethered
To rip yourself to pieces on the chains

Ivory skin shackled in dark bruises
Bloody lips kissed with burning tongues
Bright eyes wild in their panic
An inhuman misuse of all you are

Naked and tortured and twisted
Demon hands buried in innocent flesh
Tonight we're the only one's who feel it
And I falter as my heart pains for you

To emerge wounded but unruined
More beautiful with every scar revealed
Though these wasted arms aren't worthy
I'll take care of you

Two hands tangled together always
Two hearts pulsing in between
Leave the light on for me forever
I won't let you be what's left behind

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#371146 - 09/27/11 09:36 AM - [Re: StAiNeD]
exhale Offline
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Edited by exhale (01/13/13 11:29 PM)

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#372024 - 10/10/11 12:03 AM Re: Left Behind [Re: StAiNeD]
pbert53 Offline
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Registered: 10/26/09
Posts: 576
Loc: Washington, USA
Wow Terrell!

Great poem. Really felt it.

Touching and moving. I am moved.

peace

paul

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If you cannot control what happens to you, you can control your attitude toward what happens to you, and in that, you will be mastering change rather than allowing it to master you.

~ adapted from: Sri Ram

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#374262 - 11/04/11 10:34 AM Re: Left Behind [Re: StAiNeD]
StAiNeD Offline


Registered: 06/27/11
Posts: 17
Loc: The Bronx
Thank you all for your kind words and pms.

It means a lot

T

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#375263 - 11/14/11 04:47 AM Re: Left Behind [Re: StAiNeD]
Tyr Offline
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Registered: 10/05/11
Posts: 164
wow

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Once you hear the details of victory, it is hard to distinguish it from a defeat.

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#375297 - 11/14/11 03:52 PM Re: Left Behind [Re: Tyr]
newground Offline
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Registered: 10/11/11
Posts: 748
Loc: michigan
awesome man! so much to offer you really are an incredable individual.

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Towards thee I roll, thou all-destroying but unconquering whale; to the last I grapple with thee; from hell's heart I stab at thee; for hate's sake I spit my last breath at thee. let me then tow to pieces, while still chasing thee, thou damned whale! Thus, I give up the spear!"
Herman Melville

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#375325 - 11/14/11 09:33 PM Re: Left Behind [Re: StAiNeD]
TheTwoOfUs Offline


Registered: 11/03/11
Posts: 149
Loc: USA
Very powerful.

Thank you for sharing this.

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Matthew

Adapt. Overcome. Survive.

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#391766 - 04/01/12 12:22 PM - [Re: TheTwoOfUs]
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Edited by exhale (01/13/13 11:36 PM)

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#391845 - 04/02/12 12:12 AM Re: Left Behind [Re: exhale]
mike13 Offline
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Registered: 02/02/11
Posts: 419
Loc: California USA
I read your words yesterday when I got the news. I just could not stop crying. I thought for a brief moment or two about joining you but I know how disappointed with me you would be for giving up on the fight. Terrell I promise I will double my efforts to help anyone here in need and when they ask why I did it I will tell them about you. That way you will never be forgotten

Mike

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