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#3647 - 08/06/03 03:31 AM
King Christopher
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Registered: 03/30/03
Posts: 300
Loc: Nowhere Land
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The snow fell outside the open windows, and the rooms were cold.
You and I wandered back and forth between doorways, draped in bedsheets, wrapped thin around our forms and dragging out behind us. The hardwood floors were like an ocean, stretching from white wall to white wall, empty and clean and cold.
You were the first one to speak and you told me we would never leave.
The ceilings were high and full of rafters. You could hear the forest pressing in from beyond.
I spoke a dream of getting lost in that forest, running, with our sheets like capes or the robes of kings, flying behind us as we ran barefoot through the trees.
Our toes would turn blue, but we would be gone.
I never saw the drip of my blood on that snow, an arm torn, pushing through brambles; just the coldness of headlights as we pulled out past the gateposts, enveloped by dusk.
As night fell on country roads, the moon bright amidst the swirling snow, I sang lullabies for the king who slept in the drifts.
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And one day we will die And our ashes will fly From the aeroplane over the sea But for now we are young Let us lay in the sun And count every beautiful thing we can see
Neutral Milk Hotel - In the Aeroplane Over the Sea
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#3648 - 08/06/03 08:43 AM
Re: King Christopher
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Member MaleSurvivor
Registered: 02/27/03
Posts: 2258
Loc: Maryland USA
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As night fell on country roads, the moon bright amidst the swirling snow, I sang lullabies for the king who slept in the drifts. Josh, Thank you for a different view of winter and snow. I like it. Joe
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"Telemachos, your guest is no discredit to you. I wasted no time in stringing the bow, and I did not miss the mark. My strength is yet unbroken…"—The Odyssey, translated by W.H.D. Rouse
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#3649 - 08/06/03 01:18 PM
Re: King Christopher
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Moderator/BoD Emeritus MaleSurvivor
Registered: 05/24/03
Posts: 1223
Loc: Austin, Texas USA
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Josh,
You are imbrued by beauty, so human and so male.
It shines through brilliantly in your writing.
Thank you for sharing,
Your brother,
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"Poke salad Annie, 'gators got you granny Everybody said it was a shame 'Cause her mama was aworkin' on the chain-gang"
-Tony Joe White
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#3650 - 08/06/03 01:42 PM
Re: King Christopher
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Member MaleSurvivor
Registered: 03/11/01
Posts: 2719
Loc: Virginia
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was there safety by being there always?
or was the senerio dark
I put into my own context because
that is what I have to go by, and
maybe I am just reading into it too much
I like it, it is nice
I just want to stay safe.
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Standing together is so much better than hiding in the dark. ***I am a three time WoR Retreat Alumni*** The Round Table, Men's CSA Group, Monday 7:30pm CST, MaleSurvivor Chat
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