This is a lovely poem. I can see the meanings can go in several directions but for this morning I wish to read it as if Iím watching a heavenly storm rolling overhead. And even with its frightening elements brought by thunderous actions it somehow is comforting with the rhythms I hear being beating on the roof and decks. Iím sure Iím way off the original meaning but for this moment I find pleasure in reading it this way.
Thanks for a nice wakeup melody
Balanced (My goal)
There is symmetry