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#337549 - 08/03/10 05:40 PM Lost and Found
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Registered: 04/13/10
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Loc: Gamewell, North Carolina
In the night wanderings he seeks a friendly face
One who will not judge him quickly
Or call him a disgrace
Head bowed low searching the ground
He feels so empty and lost
Hoping soon in days to come he just might be found
In days gone by mistakes were made
They nearly took his life
One day soon he hopes to see his debt is finally paid
Through the darnkess and the fear his pain does abound
The light he longs to see
Blindly wandering through the lost and found

Gary

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"The innocence you spoiled has found a way to live"
Things I have to say (triggers)

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#337575 - 08/03/10 09:01 PM Re: Lost and Found [Re: caesar14]
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Registered: 02/17/10
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Loc: WA USA
Haunting poem. Thank you for posting it.

Why is it our debt that needs to be paid? Or does it only feel that way?

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There is symmetry
In self-reflection
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#338617 - 08/19/10 03:18 AM Re: Lost and Found [Re: earlybird]
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I wish I knew the answer to that question Early bird. I just feel like I am in debt to someone for something all the time and I cant figure out what it is I owe or to whom I owe it.

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"The innocence you spoiled has found a way to live"
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#338625 - 08/19/10 08:51 AM Re: Lost and Found [Re: caesar14]
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"In days gone by mistakes were made"

Could this line in your poem play a role in why you "feel" a need to pay a debt? Do you know what those "mistakes" were or is this a feeling as well?

I hope it's okay to ask these questions. I see this thread as a place to express thoughts and feelings in ways that can't be done in plain speach. I think you've hit an important issue with this poem. One that many of us are in a tug of war within or brains. Again thanks for the poem. I enjoyed re-reading it. EB

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There is symmetry
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#340413 - 09/18/10 01:38 PM Re: Lost and Found [Re: earlybird]
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i dnt find this poem haunting i find its some thing i can relate to during my days of seraching and crying out for understanding from with in and also hope for the future

James

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