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#334200 - 06/19/10 11:13 PM Static
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Registered: 02/17/10
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Loc: WA USA
What’s residing within?

Lyricless songs sung
Rhymeless poems written
Wordless pro’s recited
Chordless music played

Nothing but static.




Edited by earlybird (06/20/10 10:29 AM)
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#334202 - 06/20/10 12:00 AM Re: Static [Re: earlybird]
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Loc: Oklahoma
It can sure feel like this. I understand my friend.

Regs

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#334220 - 06/20/10 10:33 AM Re: Static [Re: Regs]
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Thanks Regs,

It's hard to feel inspired
Lying under this treaded tire.

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#334235 - 06/20/10 02:08 PM Re: Static [Re: earlybird]
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There are patterns
In the static
That only time
And presence reveal

Fragments are ingredients
Yearning to combine
And show themselves
Whole and coherent

So until then
Churning with others
Rising and falling
Harmonic and dissonant

Weaving lettered notes
And noted letters
Words and phrases
Gimbal and gyre

Frustrating to hear
Everything in static
But much worse
Nothing in silence

-efm

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Everybody's been through their own hell
There's nothing too special about getting hurt
Getting over it, that takes the work

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#334238 - 06/20/10 02:19 PM Re: Static [Re: Ever-fixed Mark]
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EFM wow,NICE!

I like the change in tone you brought to my rather bleak poem. So am I right, and what you are saying is if we will listen with a more perceptive ear there is rhythm and rhyme even in the harshness of static? I like that I really do. Now, I need to go and try to fine tune my ears. Any suggestions?

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