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#328882 - 04/18/10 10:09 PM The Attendance Call
Chebanon Offline


Registered: 03/18/10
Posts: 11
With each breath taken,
Life hears my call.
With each breath released,
Death knows my name.

Inquiry is made,
Which do I choose?
Is it possible,
To co-exist?

Am I here or there -
Alive or dead?
Or does my soul dwell
Lost, inbetween?

Will I ever know?
For it does seem,
Neither life, nor death
Has proper claim.

Whether here or there,
I do not know.
Yet every day,
I know to say
"Here"






Edited by Chebanon (04/18/10 10:12 PM)

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#328883 - 04/18/10 10:11 PM Re: The Attendance Call [Re: Chebanon]
Chebanon Offline


Registered: 03/18/10
Posts: 11
This is based on something that's been dwelling in the back of my mind for some months now. I more or less got a grasp of it earlier and jotted down the beginnings of this poem. It's not exactly what I imagined when I started on it, but here it is.


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#329119 - 04/21/10 12:01 AM Re: The Attendance Call [Re: Chebanon]
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Registered: 04/13/10
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Thanks for sharing this bold statement Chebanon. Being lost in the void is not easy. I am beginning to find my stride in poetry rather than just posting in general, it seems to be easier for me that way, anyway this is a very good collection of thoughts you have put down. I wish you only good things on your road to recovery.

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