I want to drop just like a falling star.
Exploding down to Earth without even an 'Oh'
And in that moment I wish the world to see me as valuable.

I wish to cry pain in the form of diamonds,
So as to make you see the wealth of my tears.
And in doing this I wish the world to see me as valuable.

I want to play not the blues,
But the oranges, the yellows, the happy hues
And in doing this I wish the world to see me as valuable.

I wish to be distinguished and yet unknown
To be figured out and explored but not categorised, never categorised.
And in doing this I wish the world to see me as valuable.

I want to feel, I want to love
I want to be one of those you two feel love for
And in that moment I wish YOU to see me as valuable.

u should write some music for that one.. it really sounds like a song

i like it

Oh thanks! xD Though I'm not good in composing music...

J_M

Awesome. Such feeling!!!!

J,

I certainly think you've found at least one of your callings...putting feelings into a musical (I agree with corey) combination of words which speak to others in that way that only a work of art can...particularly if the reader has had those same feelings.

thank you,

sono

Thank you DJ, Sono, I'm glad you guys liked it!

very nice J

MJ

Thanks MJ!

J,

Thanks so very much for sharing this very precious gift of poetry because if you didn't give it as a free gift, I would NEVER be able to afford it, (and I mean this from the bottom of my heart) because you are so very very valuable.

Love ya
Darrel

Wow, thanks a lot Darrel! When I come here I finally feel there are people who value me in a way. Thanks, really.

J.M.

Your words speak volumes to me, and move me to tears. Your tears, and your words are indeed priceless diamonds. If you can, please consider putting/getting some music attached to this.

Jim

That is really beautiful JM.

And I do see you as very valuable.

Roger

Thanks Jim, Roger, you are all very valuable to me too. Thanks for the words, they mean a lot to me.