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#311386 - 11/22/09 10:37 AM A Poor Attempt At Poetry
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Registered: 10/29/09
Posts: 94


Edited by jbh8 (02/20/13 04:04 PM)

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#311392 - 11/22/09 12:23 PM Re: A Poor Attempt At Poetry [Re: jbh8]
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Registered: 02/17/08
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Loc: Oklahoma
Not a "poor attempt" at all. I thought it was pretty good myself.

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#311447 - 11/22/09 08:08 PM Re: A Poor Attempt At Poetry [Re: prisonerID]
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Registered: 07/27/08
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Loc: TEXAS
Hi, my fraternal brothers.

It came from the depths of your soul.

I also think that it was pretty good myself.

Heal well my fraternal brothers, heal well.

Little Pete & big Pete.

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#311472 - 11/23/09 01:13 AM Re: A Poor Attempt At Poetry [Re: petercorbett]
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Registered: 01/04/08
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I thought it was good as well, and says a lot.


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#313120 - 12/05/09 09:50 PM Re: A Poor Attempt At Poetry [Re: ericc]
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I liked it a whole lot!

Darrel

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#313123 - 12/05/09 09:58 PM Re: A Poor Attempt At Poetry [Re: Derdlecar]
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Registered: 05/20/08
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Loc: Denver, CO
I would be willing to give it 9.5 on a 10 scale. Perhaps you could do a 2nd verse and maybe a 3rd verse as well as a chorus line then sell it for the big bucks, become a song-writer???

Mark

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