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#261327 - 11/12/08 02:40 PM Feels so good....
sunwolf Offline


Registered: 09/20/08
Posts: 225
Loc: Indiana
I walked throught the sun today
I felt its burning and heat
I felt the energy it gave away
this time the burning was good
this time the energy was good
this time the light was good
I walked throught the sun today
and I saw people dancing inside it
I saw children playing
and music and poetry and wonderful stories
The sun today was marvelous
it had a smile on its face
I felt like I didn't want to leave it
it kept burning my skin
but it felt so good..
Today I walked throught the sun
and it felt so good....


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#261328 - 11/12/08 02:45 PM Re: Feels so good.... [Re: sunwolf]
michael banks Offline


Registered: 06/12/08
Posts: 1755
Loc: Mojave Desert, Ca
sunwolf,

Your poem made me feel so good.
I could actually feel the sun on my own face.
Thanks for sharing your poem with us.

Mike

_________________________
To own one's shadow is the highest moral act of a human.
-Robert Johnson-

"IT ought never be forgotten that the past is the parent of the future" John C. Calhoun

WOR Alumni Sequoia 2009

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#262275 - 11/17/08 04:25 PM Re: Feels so good.... [Re: michael banks]
roadrunner Offline
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA
sunwolf,

It's uncanny. My first thought was more or less identical to Mike's - reading your poem made me think of my face turned up to the sun. Not that there's any of that here now, but that's a different poem! smile

Much love,
Larry

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Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
(Woody Guthrie)

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