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#255095 - 10/14/08 10:40 AM Intruder
arronb Offline
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Registered: 02/02/08
Posts: 1005
Loc: Perth
Intruder

Feeling uncomfortable
looking thru a window
seeing people willing & able
longing to leave this limbo

for so long neglected
been cast aside
Left to drift rejected
Separated by a divide

there is protection
here is hostile and aggressive
an inappropriate perception
threateningly deceptive

ashamed of being
seeming so obliquely
only intruder leaving
quietly & meekly


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arronb

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#255183 - 10/14/08 07:13 PM Re: Intruder [Re: arronb]
ineffable Offline
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Registered: 02/07/08
Posts: 1371
Loc: state of holeecrapdood
hey
thought I saw someone through this window
he looked kinda lost
like he wanted to come inside
I may have recognized him?
I wanted to invite him in & make him feel welcome
but he slipped away

wait
this isn't a window
it's a mirror

this poem haunted me arron
thanks for sharing your gift

C



Edited by ineffable (10/14/08 07:15 PM)
Edit Reason: to capitol "I" 's
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