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#251039 - 09/25/08 02:06 PM a boy that was hiding
sunwolf Offline


Registered: 09/20/08
Posts: 225
Loc: Indiana
He looked at the wall
was all he could see
the shadows were always there
hounting, menacing, hurting...
he hide on himself
no one could see him now
no one was aware he was in pain
he used to look at the wall
that was all he could see
looking for a door
to escape, get out, to look beyond
He looked at the wall
wishing there was not a mirror
where he could look at himself
he did not want to see it
he did not want to look at it
he wanted it to disapear
the boy looked at the wall
and he imagined things
of a different life
of a different place
of a different time...
of a different boy...
a happy, beautiful, loving boy
that was loved, cared, hugged and kissed
as he was...as he was ment to be...






Edited by sunwolf (09/25/08 02:07 PM)

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#251043 - 09/25/08 02:15 PM Re: a boy that was hiding [Re: sunwolf]
pufferfish Offline
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Registered: 02/26/08
Posts: 6875
Loc: USA
I like your poem.

About dissociation and what should have been.

Allen

puffer


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#251044 - 09/25/08 02:16 PM Re: a boy that was hiding [Re: sunwolf]
Trucker51 Offline
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Registered: 05/20/08
Posts: 2826
Loc: Denver, CO
A boy that was beginning to find his way to freedom.

Have hope,

Mark

_________________________
"We stay here, we die here. We've got to keep moving". Trucker Mark



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#251046 - 09/25/08 02:20 PM Re: a boy that was hiding [Re: Trucker51]
sunwolf Offline


Registered: 09/20/08
Posts: 225
Loc: Indiana
\:\) thankssssssssssss


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#251061 - 09/25/08 03:44 PM Re: a boy that was hiding [Re: sunwolf]
M3 Offline
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Registered: 09/04/07
Posts: 1392
Loc: Central Ohio
Wow, keep writing... I liked that.

Michael


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#251066 - 09/25/08 04:01 PM Re: a boy that was hiding [Re: M3]
roadrunner Offline
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA
Very cool Sunwolf. \:\) So many of us will identify with that boy trying to imagine himself into a different place.

Much love,
Larry

_________________________
Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
(Woody Guthrie)

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#251438 - 09/27/08 12:26 PM Re: a boy that was hiding [Re: roadrunner]
Fissy Tsickens Offline
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Registered: 09/23/08
Posts: 466
Loc: Bassett, Virginia
Wow.

((((((sunwolf))))))

Peace and love,

John

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Wish that I could cry
Fall upon my knees
Find a way to lie
About a home Iíll never see

It may sound absurd...but donít be naive
Even heroes have the right to bleed
I may be disturbed...but wonít you concede
Even heroes have the right to dream
Itís not easy to be me

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#251550 - 09/27/08 10:35 PM Re: a boy that was hiding [Re: Fissy Tsickens]
EGL Offline
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Registered: 06/19/04
Posts: 7821
Hi, Sunwolf,

A great poem, thanks for sharing it. It shows a lot about how things were, and also how things should have been for you - an innocent, precious child who deserved better.

_________________________
Eddie

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