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#251534 - 09/27/08 07:42 PM the pinched ant
TNT8lost Offline


Registered: 09/25/08
Posts: 18
Loc: OK, USA
Commander my eyes
For the world has
Scared the likes of
Which cannot
Exist any longer.
Mistaken is the heart
That wishes to love.
Confused is the mind
That can no longer think.
Repulsive are the smells
Bombarding my senses.
A solitary tear runs in
Its own fear down my check.
Whispers say it will be ok
But anger, of the false whispers,
Festers within me.
Stand by as the ant is
Pinched by the thumb and index.







Edited by TNT8lost (09/27/08 07:43 PM)
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#251752 - 09/29/08 05:21 AM Re: the pinched ant [Re: TNT8lost]
roadrunner Offline
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA
Thomas,

That's such a powerful poem. I especially like this part:

Originally Posted By: TNT8lost
A solitary tear runs in
Its own fear down my check.

I can't think of any better way to put it.

Much love,
Larry

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Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
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#251795 - 09/29/08 10:18 AM Re: the pinched ant [Re: roadrunner]
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Registered: 09/25/08
Posts: 18
Loc: OK, USA
thank you.

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