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#234845 - 07/01/08 03:02 AM WHAT THEY DID TO ME
genXpoetsurvivor Offline


Registered: 07/01/08
Posts: 8
Dad held onto the lightning
To keep me silent.

Mom folded the heavy winds
As if clean laundry,

Then the soft twilight returned.

I'm a miracle because of them.


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#234846 - 07/01/08 03:04 AM Re: WHAT THEY DID TO ME [Re: genXpoetsurvivor]
genXpoetsurvivor Offline


Registered: 07/01/08
Posts: 8
Okay, so this isn't the best poem in the world. It's very metaphorical and secretive. I basically say I'm a miracle because of them because I've survived and I may be able to forgive eventually.


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#234854 - 07/01/08 04:31 AM Re: WHAT THEY DID TO ME [Re: genXpoetsurvivor]
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Registered: 01/21/08
Posts: 1242
Loc: infinity
Wow! Just four master strokes and I see a whole painting!

_________________________
My Story
My Art

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#239714 - 07/23/08 09:45 AM Re: WHAT THEY DID TO ME [Re: blueshift]
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA
genXpoetsurvivor,

That's a wonderful poem, and as you say - very metaphorical and secretive. But hey, I remember your survivor stry so this doesn't surprise me. Still, I'd like to hear more about your message here, if you feel you can share with us.

Much love,
Larry

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Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
(Woody Guthrie)

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