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#234845 - 07/01/08 03:02 AM WHAT THEY DID TO ME
genXpoetsurvivor Offline

Registered: 07/01/08
Posts: 8
Dad held onto the lightning
To keep me silent.

Mom folded the heavy winds
As if clean laundry,

Then the soft twilight returned.

I'm a miracle because of them.

#234846 - 07/01/08 03:04 AM Re: WHAT THEY DID TO ME [Re: genXpoetsurvivor]
genXpoetsurvivor Offline

Registered: 07/01/08
Posts: 8
Okay, so this isn't the best poem in the world. It's very metaphorical and secretive. I basically say I'm a miracle because of them because I've survived and I may be able to forgive eventually.

#234854 - 07/01/08 04:31 AM Re: WHAT THEY DID TO ME [Re: genXpoetsurvivor]
blueshift Offline

Registered: 01/21/08
Posts: 1242
Loc: infinity
Wow! Just four master strokes and I see a whole painting!

My Story
My Art

#239714 - 07/23/08 09:45 AM Re: WHAT THEY DID TO ME [Re: blueshift]
roadrunner Offline
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA

That's a wonderful poem, and as you say - very metaphorical and secretive. But hey, I remember your survivor stry so this doesn't surprise me. Still, I'd like to hear more about your message here, if you feel you can share with us.

Much love,

Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
(Woody Guthrie)


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