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#237711 - 07/12/08 06:07 PM watching,waiting,wondering
kellticwarrior Offline
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Registered: 03/10/08
Posts: 89
Loc: vancouver,b.c.,canada
watching......
the beautiful scenery before me,
my life's events unfold,
each day as it begins and ends,
the ones i love struggle to find thier way,
all our decisions play themselves out like an
unrehearsed dance,
watching......

waiting......
for my path to be more certain,
for time to pass quickly,
for my world to make sense,
for love to come rescue me,
to be whole again,
waiting......

wondering......
if it is all worth anything,
if i can make right all i have done wrong,
if i can be the man i want to be,
when it will be my turn to shine like the sun,
wondering......

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Love heals everything

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#239520 - 07/22/08 11:25 AM Re: watching,waiting,wondering [Re: kellticwarrior]
roadrunner Offline
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA
Kelly,

Your poems usually move me and this one is no different in that respect. But you know what? My first thought on this one is that it needs a fourth verse....

Much love,
Larry

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Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
(Woody Guthrie)

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