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#235227 - 07/02/08 08:17 AM I promise
charles law Offline


Registered: 06/04/08
Posts: 28
Loc: perth australia
Dear lover

I canít ask you to bare my burdens
I canít ask you to bare my fears and doubts
I canít ask you to bare my soulís pain
I canít ask you to bare my anger

No matter how strong you and I are
Ghosts and demons that haunt me
Throughout my sleeping nights
awakens me screaming No No No

How do I hold you when I feel so weak?
Like a child needing to be hold
With its fears it s pain hoping
Will someone catch me?

Falling into an endless abyss
Canít they see itís dark and cold?
The cruel world they created
One I canít seem to tell you about

Youíre my lover, one that I want to hold
One that I want to share the beauty of love
The one I want to give all my heart to
The one I want to protect and care for

And dance the night away
If I could I would be so complete
Let me touch you as you touch me deeply
Let me find you as you find me

I promise.
can I find true love?


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#235300 - 07/02/08 04:08 PM Re: I promise [Re: charles law]
Me2 Offline
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Registered: 02/28/08
Posts: 22
Loc: USA
How did you know I needed to say this to my lover?

Talk about the perfect words!

Thank You...

Me2

_________________________
WOR Alum Dahlonega & Alta 08

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#235330 - 07/02/08 07:43 PM Re: I promise [Re: charles law]
roadrunner Offline
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA
Charles,

Oh man! I just love how you work up to this:

Originally Posted By: charles law

Youíre my lover, one that I want to hold
One that I want to share the beauty of love
The one I want to give all my heart to
The one I want to protect and care for

And dance the night away
If I could I would be so complete
Let me touch you as you touch me deeply
Let me find you as you find me

Much love,
Larry

_________________________
Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
(Woody Guthrie)

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#235389 - 07/02/08 11:50 PM Re: I promise [Re: roadrunner]
charles law Offline


Registered: 06/04/08
Posts: 28
Loc: perth australia
(the continue I promise) thanks so much for the awesome comments.keep them comming.


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#235390 - 07/02/08 11:51 PM Re: I promise [Re: charles law]
charles law Offline


Registered: 06/04/08
Posts: 28
Loc: perth australia
On this day of our commitment
I promise
As we walk down the isle
With our friends and family
Bears witness to our ceremony

As we walk hand in hand
We will take a look at each other and know
As thou time and space had stopped

I see your eyes glisten and a smile so perfect
My heart is pounding with excitement and fear
My mind racing and questioning, could this be real?
You look stunning as if you were made for this day

Weíre holding hands as we reach the alter
Gripping tightly as we face our Minister
We begin to exchange vows and I read you
My poem I promise

We kiss to seal our bond
You are so handsome and awesome
You have lifted the dark veil off my life
With every moment with every step

I want to cry itís so overwhelming
I want to ravage you and take you into my arms
And give myself to you right here and now
We sigh knowing each others thoughts

We dance as newly weds
We take leave to our honeymoon suite
We enter with joy and relief
We exchange looks passion is released


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