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#224628 - 05/16/08 07:16 PM January 18th, 6:27 P.M.
Corbin327 Offline

Registered: 04/29/08
Posts: 38
Loc: New York

Found you yet again

Even on the straight and narrow

Never narrow enough

Skin on my neck dances

I feel you behind me

Because you were always there

I just stopped looking

And now we crash

Into ourselves

Where my mind wanders

Passing through your center

Then out again

A longing breath

Scent of sadness

I know where this path leads


Step once


My head back

And my eyes close

I've found you

Because you were always there

The sacred lies in the ordinary

#226033 - 05/23/08 12:14 PM Re: January 18th, 6:27 P.M. [Re: Corbin327]
roadrunner Offline
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA
Very interesting poem. It leaves so many avenues for interpretation - something I kind of like.

Much love,

Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
(Woody Guthrie)


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