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#216132 - 04/07/08 11:09 AM Re: Please [Re: VN]
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This is incredibly well written for a non - native speaker.
You're a very talented writer VN.

The poem reminds me of another - I have it somewhere
it's called: "The Art of Listening."
It may also be online.

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#216286 - 04/07/08 06:34 PM Re: Please [Re: VN]
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Very cool poem Visha, and so honest and right to the point. And your English is fine bro! I'm trying to imagine one of us writing anything like this in Russian!

Much love,
Larry

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As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
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