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#213839 - 03/28/08 11:00 PM what do you see?
king tut Offline
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Registered: 02/13/08
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Loc: UK
a thought i made up that you can interpret (in absolutely any way) and answer as you see fit if you want

Awake from a deep slumber
you are reborn
allow your eyes to adjust to the light
what do you see?


this is mine:

i see a green valley, i am looking down at it from its side
it isn't cold but it isn't warm
it isn't windy but it is more than a gentle breeze
i am sitting alone
i am taking deep breaths, remembering, tasting the air
i realise that the world is really just for us

i let the soil beneath my feet feel my weight
i let the wind brush my body
and the rain pound my skin

and i hold my head up high
and never doubt my worth
never doubt my existence
never ever let myself think i'm less

i would have strength
even enough strength to make any anger go away forever
i'd be content and have pride
i would be reborn

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"...until lambs become lions"

I love you, little lewis, and i will never leave you. We are the same. You brighten my day, and i will make sure that i brighten yours. Hugs and kisses.


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#213884 - 03/29/08 03:32 AM Re: what do you see? [Re: king tut]
dark empathy Offline
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Registered: 11/26/07
Posts: 1927
Loc: durham, north england
Awake from a deep slumber,
you are reborn,
allow your eyes to adjust to the light, what do you see?

I'm standing on a cliff just before dawn. The last few stars fade in the clear sky and I know that any moment the edge of a red sun will rise up out of the see. The christal air is clean with the smell of salt, and a gentle wind combines with the rising tide to form a soft melody. She stands beside me, her hand in mine, and my love for her and for myself fills the world with golden light, calm but at the same time exhilerating, as steady as the cliff on which we stand, yet as varied in communication as the song of sea and wind.

I can catch all creation in a silver net of words and offer it to her, to everyone as a present, ---- as can she, and I have no doubt, no lack.

I'm fully master of my own thought and my own love, giving and accepting in equal measure, and knowing what I give is of just as much value as what I receive, because I have as litle doubt of myself as of her.

All the fear, all the self-doubt, all the pain is gone and I stand, the same as I was before but so much more.

I am reborn.


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