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#160614 - 06/08/07 09:03 AM The greatest pain
Jaysen Offline
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Registered: 06/14/06
Posts: 680
Your tainted kiss of ecstasy drains my life. Losing sight, losing direction, traveling so far into your sick little world.
Guided me away from all I had to live for, smothered me in self inflicted pain. Standing on unstable ground looking for the missing pieces of my broken heart. Hopes and dreams quickly fade away. You are the disease that has infected me and here I kneel, alone on broken dirty knees.

You are the greatest pain that I have ever known.

My words never came out properly instead they come out like a bullet to the brain. Fighting the system from within I burn everything that was once a fond memory, set off by the slightest trigger. False hope is for the weak. Through broken windows of your evil mind Iím there begging for mercy, resisting and you turn away so gracefully. Suffocating me with your fatal kiss of death.

Powerless against the machine, grinding my self esteem down to nothing.


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#160621 - 06/08/07 09:22 AM Re: The greatest pain [Re: Jaysen]
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Registered: 04/05/01
Posts: 1032
beautiful....stunning....you have an amazing knack for words.

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#160632 - 06/08/07 09:53 AM Re: The greatest pain [Re: pain4ever]
Jaysen Offline
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Thank you, most of my words are lyrics to songs that I've written for my band. Trust me when I say they sound way better when put to music!

This is the only way I've ever really known how to express myself. Whatever works hey?

J


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#160646 - 06/08/07 10:42 AM Re: The greatest pain [Re: Jaysen]
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Registered: 04/05/01
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Whats the bands name...would love to get some of ur music...pm me if you dont want to say it publicly!

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#160694 - 06/08/07 02:45 PM Re: The greatest pain [Re: pain4ever]
Still Offline
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Registered: 02/16/07
Posts: 6602
Loc: FEMA Region 1
I've got a dark bass-line for this one

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#160859 - 06/09/07 12:38 PM Re: The greatest pain [Re: Still]
roadrunner Offline
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA
Jay,

I can just imagine this put to music. That's a powerful way to express emotions and I'm glad it's working out for you. Like you say, hey, whatever works!

Much love,
Larry

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Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
(Woody Guthrie)

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